“Fate or Choice?”
by Criselda D. Marińas
Midway upon the journey of our life
found ourselves within a world,
oversee by instincts, unpredictable contingencies
and limited possibilities
nothing remains the same---everything, everyone changes.
Where do we find ourselves...?
thinking which path to travel---
deciding which race to join,
and suspicious which people to trust---
but meaningful choices must be made!
Is their any justice of one’s choice?
if someone followed the crowd or one’s heart
if someone seized the wrong road, shall be dashed to pieces?
if took the right one, shall be happy ‘till eternity?
we do not certainly know!
What must we do?
be strong and of a good courage, I advocate
Act for the best,
Hope for the best,
And seize whatever comes!
24 comments:
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wow, great poem,like it. keep it up.
thanks.. for the nice complement...tc ^_^.
wow ...kaw nag himo ani ms? nindot lge..
WOW and atlast for a sick of my ONE pisoCOIN naka naging FOLLWER njud koh..hi MS gud eve nyt2 tapos najud akung kalbaryo sa akung assignment hehe...joke rwah miss huh bacin masoko kah NICE ANG STORY..
elow maam nyc 1,
NICE STORY...gm
halo, maam nice story!and meaningful!
absolutely check. but sometymz we need 2 be on the wrong roed for we to know what is the right and place where we want to be,,,,,,,,,
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>hai miss<^_^
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nice poem.. kaw nag buhat?? uhm both man guro miss kinahanglan FATE AND CHOICE jud...
as My LiFE gOEs -------I mOvE on
as My LiFe DanCeS------I jAm
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COOL,
THE BEST!!!!
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fate or choice?......ms ...kulbaa nimo oi
: nyc poem ms.crissy it really touch myhart and it reflects everyones hart .i know each one of us isz not absolutely hapi but we know life na naa jd twist and turnS , ups and down peru it wil mik us strong if we fyt .hihihi .we can never regain in wat we do jd ky ulahi jd ang pgmahai .lets have a ryt decision in evrything we do and LIVE LAUGH ang LAB .. :)
fate!!!! is in you!!!
but choice/choices is our problem!!!!
hahahah??????????????????????
nice 1... ^_^
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1.They viewed it , as if their is many gods and goddesses,They express thus according to the folktales they bring into the present day (right now) , in their times before they experience a lot of amazing things according to the literature we have right now.
2.oh?? somehow they influence us a lot, our attitude of being hospitable in return with the gratitude that we encounter.
The story of Mt. Kanlaon, where they give their only daughter to the hero named Khan Laon from a very far away land to kill the dragon who threatened their town to be destroyed , if they wont offer a pure lady.
3. It is significance since we belong in country Philippines and we are also accountable with what we have. The best example for me is that we Filipino can still smile in the midst of the storm , we have acquire it from our ancestors too.
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